Pearson Moore provides his take on episode 13, “What Is Dead May Never Die”, in his latest essay for WinterIsComing.net.
The Loyalties of Summer: An Analysis of Game of Thrones Episode 2.03
by Pearson Moore
Hers is not a fair-weather loyalty.
“I fought for my king. Soon I’ll fight for him on the battlefield, die for him if I must.”
Hers is the genuine loyalty every king wishes to see in his subjects, but rarely receives more than lip service from self-absorbed citizens. There is no truer devotion to be found anywhere in the realm, and Renly is wise to trust Brienne, daughter of Lord Selwyn Tarth, with his life and everything that is his. But she is among the knights of summer, and her greatest virtue—her loyalty—cannot endure the privations of darkness and ice. Winter is coming, and the summer virtues—even those perfections represented by the most worthy of Westeros—will be swept aside in the upheavals to come.
Tonight we did not see an episode as much as we heard a poem—a pair of tercets forming a magnificent stanza in six acts—the richest, most eloquent harmonies yet composed in this Song of Ice and Fire. We heard of dead men and ghosts and drowned gods, we witnessed sword and sacrifice, saw images of identity, power, and duty. But most of all we heard a lament for summer’s end, a pained and passionate song to a virtue that never receives its due. Tonight’s episode was about the most ephemeral perfection of them all: Loyalty.
What Is Dead May Never Die
“What is dead may never die, but rises again harder and stronger.”
I have to believe these words would pose a challenge to grammarians and linguists in their strange conflation of tense and mood, but the oath is not meant to be understood outside of the reality of rededication to the Drowned God. The words, actions, and even some elements of the theology match those of the Christian baptism familiar to those in Western cultures. The words, actions, and philosophy of Christian baptism, like their Iron Islands counterparts, make little sense when isolated from the rich context of their faith tradition. But within that tradition, words are wedded to thought, actions become precursor to resolve.
Theon had a difficult choice to make. The baptism in salt water was the ritual sign of his decision, the death of his former wolf identity and resurrection into the harder, stronger heritage of salt and iron. He could have undergone the ritual without severing his ties to House Stark. But he was torn at every level, and Yara knew it.
“Why didn’t you tell me?” he asked his sister. She could have told him, but what would this have accomplished? For the hard women and men of the Iron Islands words have no value independent of thought, action, and resolve. Blood relation does not carry significance in itself, but can only point to commitments that bond one person to another. This is quite different from the Stark understanding of blood as a perfection in itself, a condition that rose above the importance of name, title, or position. Theon was Balon’s blood, as Eddard Stark might have said, but being of iron blood, at least in the Iron Islands tradition, did not in itself indicate anything of Theon’s character or suitability for service to Pyke. This distinction in the meaning of blood is crucial to our understanding of the unique place of the salt-and-iron pirate culture of the Iron Islands in the greater scheme of Westeros. This wholesale reorientation of values will affect every future interaction between Theon, his family, and their seafaring countrymen and vassals as they advance toward the wolf’s lair at Winterfell.
“I wanted to see who you were first,” Yara said. “And I did.” He denied the charge that he was anything less than his father’s son, that iron and salt did not course his arteries and veins.
“I have no other family!”
“Don’t you? Make your choice, Theon, and do it quickly. Our ships sail with or without you.”
In the Christian tradition, baptism wipes away all sin. Even if the candidate has raped, pillaged, murdered, and committed every foul act imaginable, when the minister of the sacrament pours water over her head and intones the formula, “I baptise you in the name of the Father, and of the Son, and of the Holy Spirit,” she is released of every stain of evil or imperfection. She becomes clean, whole, equal in every way to any other member of the community of believers.
I have no idea how Theon’s new relationship to old loyalties will be portrayed on the small screen. But if Yara’s past behaviour and Balon’s temperament serve as accurate guide—and I believe they do—Theon’s baptism into the faith of the Drowned God will not confer on him any special privilege of bloodline or family position. He’s still going to have just one ship to pilot, and he’s still going to have to prove to his father and to his sister that he is a hard man, that he can be trusted to make hard decisions.
Those of us privileged to eavesdrop on Theon’s renewed dedication to the family of his youth know there are yet strong reasons to question the authenticity of his conversion.
“Your time with the wolves has made you weak.”
Balon did not question Theon’s physical strength or even his warrior prowess. Balon knew Theon’s heart had found a home in Winterfell. The signs of his true affinities were numerous and clear. Probably he could have predicted Theon’s warning letter to King Robb, perhaps even down to syntax and tone. That Theon burned the letter might indicate to the casual viewer that he has crossed the Rubicon, that bygones are now truly bygones, and he can be counted a true son of Balon Greyjoy. I doubt that Lord Greyjoy believes this happy fiction, and we should not believe it, either.
We speak here of sympathies of the heart—affinities that might be expressed as conviction, or formally recited as an oath of fealty. In the end, though, these sympathies are stronger than the most steadfast virtue, yet weaker than the most fleeting desire. Theon’s baptism at the seashore carries no more significance and has no greater chance of consistent future demonstration than any displays of fealty he might offer House Stark. This is because the virtue under discussion is Loyalty, and this attribute of human excellence is subject to forces that are fickle at best in ordinary times, but positively wreak havoc during periods of war.
We Need Men Like Craster
True loyalty demands sacrifice. We see in Brienne’s willingness to give everything, even her life, the admirable disposition of a soul truly devoted to the convictions of her heart. Sacrifice has been an important motif throughout the thirteen episodes of Game of Thrones, and it was well represented this evening. Sacrifice is sometimes admired, but always difficult, and even when it is reviled, it is often necessary.
Jon Snow became an intimate witness to the cold harshness of sacrifice when he saw the unyielding fire in Jeor Mormont’s eyes.
“Wildlings serve crueler gods than you or I. Those boys … are his offerings.” His sacrifice.
If Lord Commander Mormont had access to the Hebrew Scriptures, he would no doubt read with quiet approbation the chapter from Genesis in which the Creator demanded that Abraham sacrifice his only son, Isaac (Gen. 22:1-19). The reality of life north of the Wall was not always pleasant, not even to the hard men of the Night’s Watch. “We need men like Craster,” Lord Mormont said. Rangers, including Jon’s uncle Benjen, would have perished if not for the hospitality of Craster and his daughter-wives. That Craster served cruel gods was not for Jon to approve or disapprove. It was the way of the uncivilised North, and Jon would simply have to live with it.
We are not members of the Ancient Order of the Night’s Watch, though, and we are not required to surrender our scruples. We know something that neither Jon Snow nor Jeor Mormont can know: the identity of the “thing” that abducted the newborn. Readers of GRRM’s novels know that “thing” as an Other; in the televised version of the story we know these beings as White Walkers.
We should not expect to fully understand Lord Mormont’s rationale. At this early point in the story we have little insight into his history, the history of the Night’s Watch interactions with groups north of the Wall, and Mormont’s personal motivations. He has had to accept unpleasantries as they are rather than molding them into something he would prefer.
But I believe we are expected to move beyond a simple recognition of Craster’s sacrifice as an evil act. He is surrendering his babies to entities he knows to be antithetical to human life. Whether his newborn boys turn into wights or White Walkers, or feed some other unholy design of the blue-eyed demons, he knows he has struck a deal with the Devil. We are no less aware of this truth, but I believe there is yet a more important truth to be absorbed from the events of this episode. Craster’s offering was not the episode’s only depiction of the sacrifice of a male child.
“You gave me away. Your boy! Your last boy! You gave me away like I was some dog you didn’t want anymore.”
Like Craster, Lord Greyjoy gave away his son, his child, as a means of appeasing powers greater than his own. For Theon, the hypocrisy was clear. “You gave me away, if you remember, the day you bent the knee to Robert Baratheon, after he crushed you.”
I suppose we could construct some logical or literary argument in which Craster’s sacrifice is also seen as manifest hypocrisy, but I don’t believe we need to couple the sacrifice of a male child with hypocrisy in order to conclude we are being asked to consider sacrifice of a child as unacceptable in George Martin’s story-world.
The entire episode was crafted with such expertise that we do not need to rely on arguments as flimsy as these. In fact, the episode was a multi-layered cake (the literary term is chiasm), with frequent allusion to sacrifice made during the episode, sandwiched between Craster’s Sacrifice in the opening sequence and Lommy’s Sacrifice in the closing scene. The second stratum is a discourse on Power, the third layer of the cake deals with Loyalties to House Baratheon and House Lannister, the fourth stratum reveals Theon’s struggle with Loyalty, and the focal point—the delicious centre of this masterful confection—is, paradoxically, out of focus. I will return to this fascinating cascade of events later in the essay.
Our theme in this section is sacrifice. I have mentioned so far only those sacrifices that I believe George Martin and his capable acolyte, Bryan Cogman, are singling out for our disapproval. But before Cogman delivered his coup de grâce with the death of Lommy (an improvement over GRRM’s original, in my opinion), he gave us two instances of sacrifice intended to meet with universal acclaim. Yoren’s sacrifice was obvious and only apparently unnecessary. We might consider that Arya “wasted” Yoren’s self-sacrifice by taking time to liberate Jaqen H’ghar, Rorge, and Biter from their confinement, and that Gendry “wasted” the precious time Yoren gave him by fighting Ser Lorch’s men. However, Arya’s sympathetic action to save the three criminals was not only an act of mercy, but was in itself a second instance of self-sacrifice in which she put the condemned men’s survival ahead of her own escape from capture. In condescending to their necessity, she was also acknowledging their membership with her in the Sisterhood of the Damned. Thus, there was a general cascade of sacrificial redemption in which Arya’s circle of influence grew, in ways that probably will have significance later in the story.
The linear telling of the story and the multi-layered chiastic cake were not rich enough fare for the expert raconteurs of this chapter in the saga, though. Bryan Cogman harked back to the opening scenes of the series in two important homages that emphasised the Power Discourse and the theme around sacrifice. Lommy’s Sacrifice, in particular, was elevated to an importance that deserves its own section.
A Song of Ice and Needle
Lord Eddard Stark sat quietly in the peaceful godswood, oiling his longsword, Ice. He had used the sword only days before to kill a young man who deserved to die. Soon, everyone in his house would come under attack, and members of House Lannister would steal his sword from him. In an ironic turn of events, Ice would be used to execute him, and his sacrifice would become the most memorable event of Season One.
Arya Stark sat quietly in the peaceful barn, oiling her sword, Needle. She had used the sword only days before to kill a young man who deserved to die. Soon, everyone in the barn would come under attack, and members of House Lannister would steal her sword from her. In an ironic turn of events, Needle would be used to execute Arya’s brother, Lommy, and his sacrifice would become the most memorable event of the third episode of Season Two.
The parallel structure was unmistakable, and the intention was quite clear. The measured grace of Arya’s hand motions along the length of the sword—even the cadence of the motion and her concentration—were perfect reproductions of her father’s prayerful attentions from last season. This intricate level of artistic detail was not isolated to the final sequence, but was precisely portioned throughout the episode, creating a tightly stitched thematic whole unequalled so far in the series.
Lest we think this sequence of details around father and daughter, longsword and rapier, is some unnecessary icing on the cake, though, we should give thought to the final objective of this exercise in parallel literary structure. The episode began with heated reference to a despised form of sacrifice. The story ended with a horrible case of child sacrifice. The inner layers of the story brought us into the pain and hypocrisy of Balon Greyjoy’s sacrifice of his only son, Theon.
If not for the Ice//Needle parallel, we might be able to ascribe any observations regarding the idea of sacrifice to an overactive imagination. We could never be sure that the writers wished us to believe that sacrifice was an important theme in this episode, nor that we were being asked to believe certain truths about the nature of sacrifice in Game of Thrones. With the unambiguous parallel to the execution of Ned Stark, any uncertainty regarding the importance of sacrifice to this part of the story can be dismissed and we can get on with the business of delving deeper into the theme.
Since the sword/execution parallel reaches all the way back to the first and ninth episodes of Season One, I believe we should feel some comfort in believing that the theme will bear significance far into future seasons of GoT. If this is true, what should we make of the idea of sacrifice in our Song of Ice and Fire?
Certainly the idea of sacrifice, at least in this episode, seems to be associated with the theme of Loyalty. But if Loyalty is, as I indicated in the introduction, a “summer” virtue unsuited to the exigencies of “winter”, what is the significance of Loyalty to the story?
If we are to grasp the meaning of Loyalty and Sacrifice in GoT, I believe we need to give time to a consideration of the second stratum in tonight’s multi-tiered cake: Power.
The Dragons Are Gone
“Maybe magic once was a mighty force in the world, but not anymore. The dragons are gone. The giants are dead, and the Children of the Forest … forgotten.”
So much for the invincibility of magic, the greatness of dragons, the power of giants. What is power, anyway? “It is a curious thing”, is it not? “It’s a trick, a shadow on the wall”; isn’t that all that magic is anymore, nothing but a trick, a shadow? Aren’t these old ideas nothing more than stories?
“That’s exactly what they are, Bran: Stories.”
“I know a story about power,” Old Nan might have told him. But instead, we heard a story about power from Westeros’ greatest storyteller, Lord Varys:
“Three great men sit in a room. A king, a priest, and a rich man. Between them stands a common sellsword. Each great man bids the sellsword kill the other two. Who lives? Who dies?”
Two stories about the nature of power—the first, a story of ancient powers long forgotten; the second, a story of present-day powers vitally relevant. The first discourse on power occurred in the third scene from the beginning of the episode, the second discourse occurred in the third scene from the end of the episode. If you have not yet fallen in love with the compelling artistry of this beautifully designed episode, I invite you to view the episode again, this time with attention to the fascinating parallels and multi-tiered connections between scenes. It really is a rare instance of small-screen genius.
Recall the pivotal scene from Episode 1.01 in which Bran confronted his father about what the condemned ranger had seen north of the Wall:
Ned: The White Walkers have been gone for thousands of years.
Bran: So he was lying.
Ned: A mad man sees what he sees.
It was evident from Bran’s reaction to Ned’s words that he did not believe his father. Compare the above exchange now to the one we witnessed this evening between Maester Luwin and Bran:
Bran: Old Nan used to tell me stories about magical people who could live inside stags, birds, wolves.
Luwin: That’s exactly what they are, Bran: stories.
Bran: So she was lying. They don’t exist.
We might as well have substituted Bran’s dead father for Maester Luwin in tonight’s exchange; Ned’s words would not have differed even in tone from those delivered by Maester Luwin.
The real genius of these parallel discourses on power was the meeting of two worlds that are usually kept distinct, running side by side on tracks that never intersect. Tonight they were running so close to each other that I found myself hoping for a collision—but of course that monumental event is many seasons away.
The two worlds I speak of here are those represented by the adults-only Game of Thrones and the greater Song of Ice and Fire I usually reserve to what I call the Sisterhood of the Damned. Renly, Stannis, Catelyn, Robb, and Cersei inhabit the adults-only world obsessed with the deadly dance around the Iron Throne, while the Sisterhood of the Damned—and its membership comprising Cripples, Bastards, and Broken Things—constitutes the locus of the greater story of our Song of Ice and Fire. These are usually separate stories, with the adult tale drawing attention toward the centre (The major houses, then King’s Landing, then the Red Keep, and finally the Iron Throne), and the children’s story drawing attention to the periphery (Arya at the chaotic centre, outward toward Bran in Winterfell and Drogo in Vaes Dothrak, outward to Jon Snow at the Wall and now north of the Wall, outward to Daenerys Targaryen in Vaes Dothrak and now east of Vaes Dothrak). The greater truths reside at the periphery, available for viewing only by the Damned. Bran walks with wolves, sees through their eyes; Daenerys walks with dragons, shares their comfort with furnace and flame.
Luwin lectured Bran, Varys lectured Tyrion. Two members of the adult world lectured two members of the Sisterhood of the Damned, and they did so in a thematically- and temporally-parallel, episode-long literary chiasm that has long served as the exciting “sound bite” trailer to the second season.
So, we wait in delicious, excruciating anticipation of the inevitable crossover between these two parallel story-worlds. When these parallel tracks do finally run into each other, the reverberations will echo through the entire story, and no happy dovetailing will this be. Rather, it will shake the story to its core, rattle us, shock us in its audacious gravitas.
But thanks to the structure of tonight’s stanza in the Song, we know something of the contours of the coming storm. What is power, Varys asked. He posed the question, but consistent with his station among those blind to the truths of the periphery, he presumed to provide an answer, too. “Power resides where men believe it resides. It’s a trick, a shadow on the wall, and a very small man can cast a very large shadow.” Power, in other words, is sophistry. It is political science. It is showmanship. It is the modern-day reformulation of the ages-old idea that Man is the Measure of all Things, that women and men can mold power into their own image and likeness.
The Martin worldview would appear to be entirely at odds with this presumption of human ascendency. That power is “a trick, a shadow on the wall” occurs in precise parallel with Maester Luwin’s proclamation that “The dragons are gone. The giants are dead, and the Children of the Forest … forgotten.” We know the dragons live, the giants reside north of the Wall, and the Children—well, of course, Maester Luwin was speaking with one of them. All of these ancient, so-called “dead and forgotten” powers are very much alive.
Notice, though, most importantly, these ancient powers are powers in and of themselves. They do not depend on the caprices of women and men to bring to bear their imprint on the world. Those humans who assert the illusion of power cannot claim to control the tempest or still the sea or by eloquence of word beguile the Children of the Forest. These primal powers are what they are. They are not subject to the whims of humankind or the sweet coercions of sophistry or rhetorical illusion. Power is not Varys’ parlour trick, but Bran’s nocturnal hunt in the godswood; not Varys’ “shadow on the wall”, but Daenerys’ séance in the burning conflagration. Power is real, and integral to Martin’s story-world. Therefore, the ultimate resolution of the Game of Thrones will somehow involve the application of primal power, and the person who sits the Iron Throne at the end of Book Seven will have the backing not only of “shadows on the wall”, but the informed consent of direwolves and dragons, too.
Of Thimbles and Helms
“Don’t lose it again,” Lord Mormont said, pushing Longclaw across Jon’s chest.
Mormont was not lecturing a forgetful child in this scene. Nor was he even admonishing his steward to take better care of the family heirloom he gave Jon last season after the incident of the wight attack. Lord Mormont’s words carried far deeper significance. Longclaw is not a mere possession, or even a cherished object carrying sentimental value. Longclaw is a totem, bearing significance unique to Game of Thrones.
Longclaw is not merely a sword. It could be thought of as the symbolic representation of its owner, but even that mode of thinking does not convey the full meaning of the sword. We can gain a more accurate appreciation of Longclaw by considering Sam’s thimble.
“My mother used it for sewing. She let me sit with her, and I read to her. It’s the only thing I have of hers. She gave it to me before I left for the Wall.”
The critical words are “It’s the only thing I have of hers.” The thimble not only represented Sam’s mother, but was a stand-in for her. In some sense, the thimble didn’t just represent his mother, but was his mother. In the same way, Longclaw was supposed to be passed on to Jeor Mormont’s son, Ser Jorah. Longclaw could be given to no one else; it was to be the steel-and-stone manifestation of House Mormont. When Jorah fled the continent, he severed ties to father and house, and Lord Mormont had no heir for the family totem. Jon Snow solved the problem of a worthy successor to the Longclaw legacy, though, when he killed the wight that attacked Lord Mormont. The Lord Commander had the pommel modified especially for Jon and presented it to him, not as a gift, not as any mystical assertion that Jon was somehow continuing the Mormont line, but as a raw statement of Jon’s identity.
The horned bull helm created by Gendry Waters was associated with him from the moment he created it at the forge. The goldcloaks of the City Watch would know Gendry’s identity through this helm. When Arya wished the Lannister bannermen to believe they had killed Gendry, all she had to do was point to the helm. “You already got him,” she said, indicating Gendry’s new surrogate-in-death, Lommy Greenhands.
Balon Greyjoy stripped away Theon’s identity in last week’s episode when he pulled off the chain that held Theon’s cloak in place. When the cloak fell, Theon’s identity as a Stark fell with it. That the identity was false did not reduce the impact of Balon’s bold stripping away of his son’s façade.
Arya’s Needle was more than a cherished gift. “Sansa can keep her knitting needles,” Arya said. “I have a needle of my own.” When the Lorch rider seized Arya’s sword, he was stripping her of her identity just as much as Balon had earlier stripped Theon. In fact, the violent seizure of Arya’s identity was even worse, affected her even more, because Needle had been a valid, accurate, and complete manifestation of Syrio Forel’s dancing student.
This way of looking at GoT totems brings new insight to old events. For instance, what are we to make of the deeper meaning inherent in Ned’s execution? If Needle is the steel-blade incarnation of Arya, can we attach any less significance to Ice? “It wasn’t the wine that killed Robert, nor the boar,” Varys said to Lord Stark in Episode 1.08. “The wine slowed him down and the boar ripped him open. But it was your mercy that killed the king…. I trust you know you’re a dead man, Lord Eddard.” If we interpolate to the accusation implicit in Varys’ words, we could not be far off the mark in believing Varys was saying that Ned was responsible for his own death. We could say Ned’s mercy led to his own death, or his preoccupation with honour was the fault that led to his execution. Now we can include Ice in our deliberations on Ned’s failings, and expand the list of dubious self-destructive virtues to include Ned’s justice, as exemplified in the sword he used to administer the Justice of the North.
Loyalty
Baptismal blessings came to Theon Greyjoy in threes:
Bless him with salt
Bless him with stone
Bless him with steel.
In the same way, loyalties were tested, affirmed, or denied in groups of three. King Renly invited loyalty to his cult of charisma on the part of those closest to him: Brienne, Loras, and Margaery. Tyrion invited loyalty to his authority as Hand on the part of those sitting the Small Council: Pycelle, Baelish, and Varys.
The Cult of Renly, of course, is based on the charismatic leadership of its central figure. It stands to reason, then, that its most ardent member is the one who most faithfully exudes and professes fealty not to cause or country, but to the specific personality of Renly Baratheon. Brienne of Tarth is Renly’s top cheerleader, and the person who most truly expresses the type of devotion he wishes to engender in all his followers.
As close as Loras was to his beloved Renly, he remained unable to surrender himself to the type of loyalty Renly demanded. Loras was not loyal to the personality of Renly, nor even to the idea of Renly. Instead, Loras was loyal to his own glory. When Brienne stole that glory—even a small fraction of it—Loras lost his loyalty and could no longer share Renly’s bed.
One of the most poetically engineered scenes tonight was the bedroom meeting of Renly and Margaery. Renly said he had drunk much wine. “As is your right, Your Grace. You are a king.” The scene ended with Margaery’s confirmation that Renly could do anything he wished, for “You are a king.” Notice she did not even say “You are the king.” Not a single instance of the definite article could cross her lips. Everything she said in reference to Renly contained the indefinite article: “You are a king. A king can do this, a king can do that.” Margaery is not loyal to Renly. She is loyal to “a king”. Compare her words to the person-specific words of Sam for Gilly:
Gilly: You shouldn’t give it [the thimble] away.
Sam: I’m not giving it away. I’m giving it to you.
Margaery, on the other hand, is giving nothing to any particular person. She is giving herself away. She gives herself to “a king”. Any king will do, and since Renly is there, he fits the bill.
Loyalty is a summer virtue because the smallest change can have enormous significance to the relationship. Once upon a time, when House Lannister was a monolith ruled by Tywin Lannister, single-minded devotion to Tywin’s whims ensured not only Grand Maester Pycelle’s survival, but his enjoyment of every pleasure available in King’s Landing. Now, with Tyrion’s promotion to Hand, Pycelle’s rote loyalty to Tywin’s surrogate, Cersei, earned him a one-way ticket to a rat-infested Black Cell.
Round Up the Usual Suspects
“Louis, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship.”
Westeros is not Casablanca, and Victor Laszlo is not going to appear in the godswood (or will he?).
That Tyrion and Varys can reject the Vichy water and share a cup of authentic French wine should not signal that Varys has suddenly come in from the cold, or has secretly shared in Tyrion’s agenda all along. Varys’ new alliance with Tyrion is an accident, a convergence of interests that has nothing at all in common with loyalties true, false, or even implied.
Varys is the Master of Spiders. He acts on information, not on devotion to principles or personalities. His brand of espionage succeeded not because he was in tune with Tyrion, but because his ways were most adaptive.
Pycelle failed because his loyalties and espionage were based on conventional relationships. It made perfect sense, then, for Tyrion to entice him with an imagined compact with House Martell. Martell was the only house to resist the Targaryens, and joined the Seven Kingdoms through matrimonial alliance well into the second century of Targaryen rule. This powerful and independent house had long exuded the kind of conventional affinities that would be apparent to anyone who valued pedestrian, vanilla-only information.
Lord Baelish did not fail the test of fealty to the Hand. Rather he failed the test of loyalty to self. He should have known to reject any dangling carrots labeled “Catelyn” or “Lysa”. Instead he succumbed to long-felt temptation and agreed to broker the imaginary liaison with House Arryn.
So Tyrion and Varys do their best impersonations of Rick Blaine and Louis Renault, but I don’t buy it. Varys did not stroll with Tyrion through the underground dragon storage room, speaking of Khal Drogo and Daenerys Targaryen. He escorted Magister Illyrio, and his deference toward House Targaryen did not seem feigned. Would his greatest dreams find fulfillment in a dragon once again sitting the Iron Throne? Or is he so pure of heart that he truly is the intelligence mercenary to the highest bidder, or to the person deemed most likely to affirm Varys’ position? Perhaps he will not drink Vichy water in Tyrion’s presence. But who’s to say he doesn’t drink a toast in private?
Identity
Arya has lost Needle—she has lost her identity. Theon lost his cloak—he lost his identity. Sansa long ago lost her identity. Once upon a time, she was the beloved lady of a kind and gentle prince, waiting for the day her storybook romance would blossom into a marriage that would reflect all the goodness of a perfect kingdom.
Not all identity is so ephemeral. Daenerys’ totem is not steel but fire-breathing flesh. Bran’s totem is not an object he can lose, but a creature integral to his being.
Sansa’s mirror image was the central focus, the core of the multi-layered cake. Occurring at 25 minutes into the episode, this brief image formed the conceptual centre of Game of Thrones’ most nuanced and carefully balanced episode to date. The image is sad, worried, bearing concerns that ought to be foreign to the heart of a fourteen-year-old girl.
But we see in Sansa’s imperfect reflection the full realm of possibilities open not only to Sansa, but to everyone, to every member of the Sisterhood of the Damned who has lost her identity. The image is blurred because Sansa has no identity. Free of a totem, free of anything defining her being, she is able now to define herself, to acquire and build up any identity she would like. Sansa, Arya, Gendry, and all whose identity has been stolen can become the people they need to be. And this is as it should be. Those who survive will not waste time in acquiring the armour of the knights of summer. Winter is coming, after all. For the power-obsessed adults this may be just a game. But for Sansa and Arya and Jon Snow and Tyrion Lannister and every other Cripple, Bastard, and Broken Thing, this is no game of thrones. This is a song of ice and fire. And the dragons are not gone.













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This one was really interesting to read (especially the parts about Renly and Tyrion), and you always kept the focus clear which made it really easier to read than last week.
So thank you!
I also really liked the fact that you highlighted the similarities between Arya and Ned scenes.
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“Tonight we did not see an episode as much as we heard a poem—a pair of tercets forming a magnificent stanza in six acts—the richest, most eloquent harmonies yet composed in this Song of Ice and Fire.”
It still feels like you’re writing to match your idea of what a piece of academic literary criticism might sound like. I don’t want to discourage you, because you put a great deal of effort into these, but I think there are definitely improvements you could make. You seem to be trying to ape the style of academic writing, while falling short on substance. Mechanically, there’s not much wrong, but you meander between rote recap of the events and overreaching symbolic analysis while only rarely hitting on meaningful insights or interrogation of the themes of the episode. Obviously you’re just doing this for fun and are under no obligation to please a wanky (not to mention condescending!) english lit scholar like myself, but if you are interested in improving these there are a few things I’d suggest:
-Decide whether you are analyzing the show or the books and don’t conflate them too much.
-Say things plainly, where possible. If you have something intelligent to say, you don’t need to mask it with overly florid prose.
-Tighten up. Less is more, and not just in terms of word length (but very much that too). Rather than an exhaustive recap where you try to make something of every event or character in the episode, think of the episode as a whole and draw out the themes most interesting to you.
-Maintain a logical, progressive structure. Come up with an overall thesis for your piece, and then provide evidence for that as you go. Tweak it as you go, and (re)write your introduction last!
-Apply the “so what” test. If you put down some nugget of information, imagine your reader asking the question “so what?” If you can’t provide a justification of why the fact is useful or relevant to your reading, cut it out.
Dave..Quote Reply
Another great essay. While often great art inspires the tendency toward ascribing meaning where there may not be meaning (much like the power parable) I have no doubt that the creators of the show are consciously exploring and offering up the themes that you eloquently write about here. After all, these are some of the best writers in the business, working with exceptional source material, with only about 60 pages of script required per episode to achieve perfection.
BGAPQuote Reply
Wedge,
Thank you for your kind comments. I’m glad you enjoyed the essay!
PM
Pearson MooreQuote Reply
That was a fantastic Essay.
GenevoseyQuote Reply
I appreciated the thoughts brought forward with this essay (and his others so far this season). Also I appreciated the tone with which these recommendations were made (especially compared to how others have brought critiques forward). I agree that the writing style and structure make it a slightly bigger challenge to gain access to what I believe are Mr Moore’s interesting ideas and analysis. I want to encourage Mr. Moore to consider some of these politely and clearly raised suggestions for improvement. That being said, I fully understand and respect the level of effort that it would likely take to fully implement the above suggestions and therefore I do not expect or require any change on the author’s part before I would consider reading more of his essays. Even as they are currently constructed I will likely put the effort forward to enjoy what I see as interesting and thought inducing nuggets.
So Mr. Moore thank you for your insight and willingness to provide it to us and expend your energy. I hope you will consider these fine suggestions to potentially help improve your audience’s ability to absorb your offerings.
NeilQuote Reply
Heh – I actually enjoyed reading this SO much more than the essay.
Great advice in there – for ANYbody that does any writing.
EdQuote Reply
Lovely writing, Pearson. I especially loved your ending. It was especially clever the way you interwove Luwin’s lecture on magic with Varys’ riddle on power. Nicely done!
I had not made the explicit connection between Arya polishing Needle and Ned polishing Ice. Now that you mention it, though, I want to also add Jon polishing Longclaw in Ep 12 to the parallel. Jon and Arya are the purest heirs of Ned Stark’s brooding embodiment of honor and justice, and the sword polishing captures it nicely.
Again, well done!
littlejanetQuote Reply
Dave..,
I am grateful for your gentle advice and words of encouragement.
My intentions are oriented around the proactive viewers of Game of Thrones. Though I have read GRRM’s novels, my appeal is to viewers and not to fellow readers. Some purist reviewers, noting that Asha in CoK has become Yara in GoT, haughtily proclaim they will continue to call the television character Asha. I hope I never say any such thing in my essays, and if I ever do place the novels above the television series, I hope you will vigorously chastise me. I write about the television series. Occasionally I will reference the novels, as in this essay, when I explained a bit about House Martell and how the position of the house affected Tyrion’s enticement of Grand Maester Pycelle. But I try to convey the attitude that reading the novels is not required for deep enjoyment of the HBO series.
As for academic appeal, again I write only for engaged viewers, not for scholars. I am no scholar, no purist, and no intellectual. If I am to be categorised, think of me, if you will, as a kind of mongrel jack-of-all-trades. My sole intention is to write for the entertainment, self-enlightenment, and amusement of engaged viewers of the HBO series Game of Thrones. There is honest confusion on this point, and I am the prime instigator of that confusion. I made the mistake last year of engaging an audience of mostly novel purists. It was my fault entirely for having neglected an analysis of the audience. There is also the confusing fact that I have cultivated friendships in the LOST academic community, and I have served as editor of their learned writings on LOST (in LOST Thought: Leading Thinkers Discuss LOST). But I can assure you, I have no illusion of writing in any way that could be considered scholarly. My ideas are half-baked, and very much *intentionally* so. I present the kernel of an idea, with the quite explicit intention that the readers of my essays will fill in the gaps and chasms in my thought with their own ideas about the nature of the theme or character I discuss in my essay.
My LOST essays are among the most popular on the Internet. I wish I could claim that this was due to some special knowledge possessed by no one else, that I lay claim to such expertise as can be found nowhere else, but it is not true. I believe the only reason for the success of my essays is that I value the ability of my audience to understand television episodes, even in a heavily serialised drama, at multiple levels. I don’t write to the lowest denominator, and I try to avoid the rigorously logical but dry kind of writing necessary to practitioners in academe. So it is that my essays will always seem lacking, incomplete, and perhaps even incoherent to those of my readers, like you, who inhabit the rarefied spaces of the Ivory Tower. Something like the words of dedication to the Drowned God, I suppose, even becoming a stream-of-consciousness record at some points, especially in my refusal to orient essay readers in the episode I am reviewing. But I *want* readers to struggle a bit, I want them to work at this, to force them to fill in those gulfs and chasms in my thought. If I provoke thought, force a dialogue, increase viewers’ enjoyment of the series, I have accomplished my objective.
PM
Pearson MooreQuote Reply
Bold points seems a little hypocritical to me…
Johnny RenoQuote Reply
Good essay. One question though: How was Lommy’s death a sacrifice?
sunspearQuote Reply
PM,
I really enjoyed your essay. It was thought provoking and did fill in gaps for me. I kept saying to myself, “He’s right!”
Keep up the good work!
Lady FlintQuote Reply
Pearson,
I have to confess that I only recently came across your writings when your book of Season One Essays turned up while searching Game of Thrones on Amazon. I had almost given up on GoT, nearly succumbing to a prevalent internet opinion that the moral complexity of the series consisted almost entirely of the stupidity of Ned in comparison to the brilliance of the Lannisters. Let’s face it, there’s so much garbage floating around that it becomes tiring, and incredibly time-consuming, to sort out the wheat from the chaff.
Please, please, please, don’t quit doing what you’re doing. (I’ve got to go count the third scene from beginning and the end of the episode now!)
ZapalaQuote Reply
I think this was your best essay yet. You have hit on something true in discussing Balon’s stripping of Theon’s identity and the re-baptism. Aso, your analysis of Margaery’s loyalty not to Renly but to the idea of his kingship is something I hadn’t noticed on first viewing; but which makes a great deal of sense.
I also like your grouping of the so-called adults in power on one side and the bastards, cripples and broken things on the other. That’s an interesting way of looking at the characters. In that sense, Varys is incorrect about power: that power doesn’t reside where people think it resides. The illusion of power does so. Real power, as you discuss via Maester Luwin, is supposed to be gone from the world of GOT – and isn’t. And such real powers are not bound by strictures such as Varys’s aphorism. The adults who wield the illusion of power may yet find themselves facing much older real powers which are indifferent to the false rules and conditions people place on illusory power to make it comfortable and palatable.
LangkardQuote Reply
Personally I don’t care either way if he keeps going. But to be honest the only reason I came to this thread was to see the gentle writing croticism and the weird ‘this is okay please keep going’ responses that I am coming to expect every week. The article itself is unreadable, to me, due to its relentless idle convolutions. I like the pictures though.
SteveQuote Reply
Dogma is such a dangerous thing. It leads people to the false conclusion that their opinions are fact. A good example: those who are convinced that their opinion that something is bad means that thing is, in fact, bad. No, it just means that you think it is bad… or good. Please don’t confuse your opinions with facts. You are entitled to your own opinions, but not your own facts.
The difference here between Person Moore and those who don’t like his essays is that Pearson doesn’t claim to have anything other than an opinion. These essays aren’t presented as fact. They are presented as opinion. On the other hand, those who make statements such as
are clearly confusing their opinions with facts. If the opposite is just as valid then it is an opinion. As in the above, we can also state “that does not necessarily mean they are bad, though.” Does the fact that some people like Lamb and Mint crisps mean that those people are wrong? Or does it mean, quite simply that some people like them and some people don’t? The person in question clearly doesn’t get that her opinions are just that… opinions. And as such, no different than Pearson Moore’s opinions. Except that Pearson Moore is quite open about his essays being his own opinions and he doesn’t make the mistake of thinking his opinions are the only interpretation.
LangkardQuote Reply
I enjoyed this essay much more than the one last week, and although I think some of the criticisms here are valid (no one’s perfect), I simply don’t understand how some of the commenters here can talk shit about this essay without backing it up, so to speak. If some of you are such great writers, let’s see some of your work. Why don’t you guys try to do an essay (even if it’s much shorter) for an upcoming episode, so we can see the difference between this “faux-intellectual nonsense” and your superior work? I’d even accept a link to an article written by someone else that properly utilizes some of the advice you’re offering Pearson Moore, if only to have an example of what you’d qualify as ‘worthwhile analysis’. Until then, I’d recommend following this bit of advice: If you don’t have anything nice (or helpful; or ‘worthwhile’) to say, then try not saying anything at all.
Pastor_of_MuppetsQuote Reply
Pearson Moore,
For this viewer, you have done all this and more. Thanks for raising the bar with an outstanding essay to match the best of S.02.
No Raven For You!Quote Reply
I would really love it if they didn’t kill Luwin, he is like a surrogate Ned Stark for me, he has the morals and the wisdom of a stark, KEEP HIM ALIVE!! Petition anyone? <<<
Harry The HeirQuote Reply
Pearson,
You make a number of good points, but I especially like your analysis of the juxtaposition of story arcs in terms of illusion of power versus actual power, which is really what this saga is all about. In the face of what is coming from the north and from across the sea, the game of thrones is just that, a game.
sukeynaQuote Reply
Mr. Moore, I have great admiration for your pen, sir. I enjoy your work immensely.
Jen@House StarkQuote Reply
Great essay! Every week these get better. Seems like they become more readable too – the first week was a bit rough, but I’m blowing through them now. Perhaps it’s just that I know they are completely worth the effort now.
OhDanyBoyQuote Reply
Harry The Heir,
How would your plan for Maester Luwin work?
Would he walk north with Bran? He’s a little old for that, don’t you think?
Would he escape to White Harbor to advise Manderly?
Would he lie low, emerging during a certain wedding to reveal the identity of Jeyne Poole?
Nah, I’ll stick to canon
littlejanetQuote Reply
This guy thinks HBO has lost its mojo:
http://www.guardian.co.uk/commentisfree/cifamerica/2012/apr/17/how-hbo-lost-the-plot
SuperdeluxeQuote Reply
Great essay, many interesting points and ideas in it. Thanks really enjoyed reading it.
LongclawQuote Reply
Just my 2 Cents…
I have to agree with some of Dave’s critiques of the author’s writing style and I may borrow Dave’s suggestions to pass along to my daughter who is taking AP English Comp in high school and could benefit by this (especially the “so what?” test).
In regard to your essay, I agree with Dave that some of the “florid prose” can distract from the points you are trying to make. I don’t always agree with your conclusions but I do appreciate the thought you put into your writing.
I especially appreciate your thoughts on identity as expressed in this episode and throughout the books and TV series so far. I was really struck by Sansa’s visage in the cloudy mirror (Sophie Turner can convey so many emotions with just her eyes) and I think you make a really valid point about how the depiction matches the blurred state her current identity. Sansa is a wounded wolf being “fostered” by a pride of lions that can smell her fear. She adopts the styles and manners of the Southern court to appeal to her captors and disguise who she really is because denying her true identity as the proud daughter of the ancient House Stark may be her only protection from harm, even if that’s what makes her valuable to the Lannisters. It’s not hard to see what a toll this takes on her. The same may be said of Arya who knows who she is but must keep it a secret, and for Gendry, who doesn’t know who he is or why he seems to be in the sites of so many important people.
I was struck last week by Balon literally “yanking Theon’s chain” and how exposed and shrunken Theon appeared to be in his father’s presence at that moment (really great camera work and Alfie Allen’s body language in that scene). Theon’s identity is the most “at sea”. The man is equal parts Salt and Iron of his birth and the wolf pack in which he was raised but he’s not allowed to own both parts of his identity any more. It was a very sad scene to see him burn the letter to Robb, but really the only choice he could make.
Only time will tell how well these characters emerge from the identity crises.
MShepNJQuote Reply
Superdeluxe,
A load of pretentious nonsense. One thing I will say is HBO has solid competition in AMC and Showtime now, and the funny thing is alot of the show that champion those channels HBO turned down.
The KingslayerQuote Reply
I must say I agree with Dave, especially on the stylistic aspects of the essays. I really do enjoy reading more thorough analysis of GoT. I will continue reading the essays but I keep hoping the style of the essays becomes a bit clearer and concize.
Sometimes the reviewer at io9 does a good job finding a unifying theme in an episode and thereby shedding new light on the content.
Tessa LeonieQuote Reply
Great essay, much better than last weeks.
Wrath of the GodsQuote Reply
I’d prefer if you would give us your thoughts on at least one of the essay items. Perhaps you can give me your thoughts on the following:
“Winter is coming, and the summer virtues—even those perfections represented by the most worthy of Westeros—will be swept aside in the upheavals to come.”
When I was watching the show, I was thinking, what the heck are these “knights of summer” put downs? Is it that they are just unprepared for the wintry weather.. are they physically inadequate.. are the summer knights fickle with their loyalty? Brienne is a knight of summer and she’s no slouch, so why would she be swept aside?
MimsyQuote Reply
Love these. Nice work Pearson.
AaronQuote Reply
Great essay. Lots of good stuff to think about. Thanks for taking the time to put fingers to keyboard.
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BuddyQuote Reply
PM,
Loved the essay. I for one like the way you write them. I enjoy following your line of thought, even if I disagree with the conclusion you come up with. It gives me a sense of the raw ideas behind the themes that would naturually be lost in act of “polishing” the essay.
I would disagree that there is any sort of conflict between power as an illusion and that of primal power in Martin’s story.
Regardless if the power is primal or not, a leaders power still flows from his followers. Why they follow is still an illusion, that could be shattered at any moment.
In one camp you have the leaders who have power because they are loved. Renly is a leader because his followers love his charisma and caring nature. Robb is a leader because his followers grew to respect him and love his success in the battlefield as well as love the idea of being free from the Iron Throne. Dany’s followers love her at this point in the story because she has dragons, and maybe respect her for freeing them from being slaves. I would also put Balon in this category, those on the Iron Islands love him for his commitment to his culture in trying to bring back the “old ways.”
Then there is the camp that have leaders who have power because they are feared. Joffrey is quickly becoming one of those. Tywin is known as a ruthless killer to those that oppose him. Cersei rules this way as well. The Mad King Aerys also ruled by fear.
But Tywin also leads using money, and that is the example Tyrion is currently following. He has bought his army with gold, and Varys is trying to show him that gold will get you power, but not a very safe way of keeping power.
That type of power is just an illusion, all it takes is someone who is loved more, feared more, or has more money to cause them to fall. Varys and Littlefinger know where power truly lies, in knowledge. However, knowing a bunch of secrets isn’t going to get you a flock of followers. You use that knowledge to move the player who has the illusion of power in a direction you want them to go. So we see how the power of knowledge is different from the illusion of power a leader has.
What is really great about the episode I see being overlooked, are the reactions of Varys and Littlefingers to Tyrion’s trick. Littlefinger is disgusted that he was duped by someone he feels is beneath him in the game. He may join Tyrion’s next plan, but make no mistake, he is plotting his response. Varys however admires the ruse, and comes to the conclusion Tyrion might be worth more than just a pawn to move around.
Anyway, I look forward to next weeks essay.
fuelpaganQuote Reply
A major improvement over last week’s. This was a very good read, and I didn’t find myself just wanting to scroll through paragraphs, I read the whole thing. I like how you stuck with the one theme of Loyalty. And the totems and comparisons to Arya and Ned were great, and I never even thought of them. Keep all future essays like this one and they’ll definitely be a great read!
LordEddardStarkQuote Reply
One way you could immediately improve your writing, is to carefully make sure that you do not directly contradict yourself in your prose.
For example, regarding Brienne:
“Hers is not a fair-weather loyalty.”
“…she is among the knights of summer, and her greatest virtue—her loyalty—cannot endure the privations of darkness and ice.”
It’s not that I have problems with your opinions, its that it’s actually impossible for the reader to determine out what you are trying to say because you directly contradict yourself. And you don’t pose it as a question, or speculate about which is true, you simply say one thing, and then say the exact opposite.
STOP DOING THIS PLEASE! THIS IS REALLY IRRITATING!
userjQuote Reply
Pastor_of_Muppets,
Here is a far superior version of what Mr. Moore’s writing could be if it were better.
http://cultural-learnings.com/2012/04/15/game-of-thrones-what-is-dead-may-never-die/
Howland ReedQuote Reply
Wow, now last week I left a comment about your essay because I really didn’t enjoy it. But this week you’ve blown my mind. Seriously good, I literally agreed with all your points. Love how you’ve broken it down in sections and kept on point. Thanks, I’m actually looking forward to next weeks :-D
you-know-nothingQuote Reply
Why does everyone have to be a critic?
Keep up the good work, Pearson.
HollyoakQuote Reply
Howland Reed,
Thanks for post a link to this essay. I read and enjoyed it, as I read and enjoy just about everything written about Game of Thrones that I can get my hands on. If this is the type of analysis you most enjoy, I am happy you have found what you like best.
Personally, I prefer the greater depth and ambiguity of Pearson’s essays, and would hate to see him change. Isn’t it lovely there are different kinds of essays for different people?
littlejanetQuote Reply
Excellent essay Pearson. You have deep insights into GoT and are skilled with words. You should ignore the “suggestions” on improving your writing by dumbing it down. Let those persons read crappy articles intended to reach the lowest common denominator.
Yan CanQuote Reply
Another incredible essay….your’s are always an interesting read! Such depth of character and their, perhaps, underlying motives for their actions or lack of….My absolute favorite episode yet this season….Favorite scenes were with Tyrion’s trilogy of his niece’s possible futures to flush out his possible enemies, Yoran’s tale of his brother & defiant courage to save Arya & Gendry and Sansa’s faded image in the mirror….Looking forward to another Sunday, bloody Sunday….& your next essay!!
Dragonshit CrazyQuote Reply
Steve,
I honestly wasn’t trying to criticize, but engage you in conversation. Perhaps my internet mojo is off kilter. :) I understand that these essays aren’t for everyone and I don’t think any less of anyone for saying so.. well.. unless they are flat out rude or belligerent.. which you weren’t and I appreciate that.
I knew you didn’t read the article and I wasn’t expecting you to read it, which is why I put the quote before I bombarded you with questions. I guess the quote wasn’t really for you to dissect, but to demonstrate that it was my trigger that caused a slew of questions on this post.
I was and still am interested in your opinion on why the northerners think the knights of summer are so lacking. I don’t know if I’m just being thick and it’s the obvious rivalry “i’m better than you” mentality or if it’s something that might have deeper meaning.
MimsyQuote Reply
I think your use of the phrase “Sisterhood od the Damned” is a tad presumptuous. It sounds rather “cliche” and arrogant (with a dash of ignorance) of you.
EdithQuote Reply
great essay, still theon..theon..repeat mode, epic music, epic acting.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cewONli_A-E
lonasQuote Reply
Superdeluxe,
And that guy is very much wrong – in my opinion. People who spend a lot of time on the internet tend to think everyone is as technically savvy and/or as interested in these things (ability to stream, etc.) as they are, but by and large this isn’t the case.
I’ll continue to subscribe to both cable and HBO until I don’t have the option, and I’d wager there are millions of others who will continue to do the same (both TWC & HBO saw the highest increase in subscribers in over five years at the end of 2011). I also happen to use iTunes, Amazon, HBO and other television apps as a supplement, rather than pirating, which also isn’t very common (in my experience) within the “internet community”.
Sure, some basic cable channels have some damn good dramatic shows (AMC: Breaking Bad, Mad Men; FX: Sons of Anarchy, Damages, JustifIed), but they usually have just as many shitty ones. With HBO, on the other hand, nearly every show they air is more adult, better written and directed, and has better acting and actors than just about everything else on television. In just 2012 they’ll have aired Angry Boys, Eastbound & Down, Luck, Girls, Veep, Tremè, Game of Thrones, The Newsroom, Life’s Too Short, True Blood & Boardwalk Empire (not including the documentaries, mini-serIes, and the films they show), and that’s just what I know of and have watched or plan on watching.
All of this is to say that the value of something is worth what someone is willIng to pay, and I have no problem supporting the cable industry (and HBO, in particular), regardless of how “chic” it is.
Pastor_of_MuppetsQuote Reply
BEST article I’ve read so far about GOT. Looking forward to reading more from the author. Love the breakdowns and analogies of different scenes. Amazing! Can’t wait for next week’s episode and article.
RobQuote Reply
BGAP,
Thank you for your generous comments.
I think you’re right about the writers orienting the story around themes. Even if they are not always consciously aware of such orientations, I have to believe they’re there. Thank you for contributing to the discussion!
PM
Pearson MooreQuote Reply
Genevosey,
I’m glad you liked it!
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Pearson MooreQuote Reply
Neil,
Thank you for contributing to the discussion in an open and generous manner.
I certainly take all input into consideration, and especially when I receive advice that is presented in such a thoughtful manner.
I am always trying to improve my craft, but at the same time, I have to be honest in telling you that I took off the training wheels a long time ago. Over a period of five years I wrote over 1100 critiques and received nearly 1000 critiques of my writing during that time. It was only after that five-year training period that I went public and began offering my LOST essays. Thus, for better or for worse, my writing is what it is. While I can change my style, the bulk of the feedback I’m receiving indicates readers are enjoying my essays. Changing style at this point does not seem to make a great deal of sense, therefore, but I continue to welcome and seriously consider well-intentioned critiques such as yours. Thank you again for your kind advice.
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Pearson MooreQuote Reply
littlejanet,
Hey! That’s a very nice addition to the discussion. I’m going to take a look again at Jon polishing his sword to see if I can squeeze any more meaning out of the sequence. Thank you for making the third connection to swords!
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Pearson MooreQuote Reply
sunspear,
You bring up an excellent question. I don’t think we necessarily need to see Lommy’s death as a sacrifice, but we can think of it that way, I believe, in at least two respects. First, if a sacrifice is the surrender of a good in exchange for some greater good, Lommy’s murder could be seen as just such a sacrifice in that if he had lived he would have slowed down the group. The Lorch man was not going to kill the boy until he learned the boy could not walk. So he sacrificed the boy for the good of the group. Second, children in general are a good, but the Lorch bannerman sacrificed this good not out of spite or anger but out of recognition of a greater good. Thanks for the question!
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Pearson MooreQuote Reply
Pearson Moore,
Just a couple of points here, by way of reply: I don’t claim to ” inhabit the rarefied spaces of the Ivory Tower”. Quite the opposite – I’m an academic by trade, but in fact, *this* was the biggest problem that I had with your writing. That you were shooting for the “ivory tower”, when in fact you didn’t need to at all, to apply good critical analysis. You were referencing tercets by your second para! It’s possible to engage deeply with a work while still writing for your readership. Who by and large, may not be familiar with Faust.
As for “wanting your readers to struggle”, I feel like this is simply the wrong attitude to take. No competent writer wants their reader to struggle. It’s like a builder saying they “want their customer’s house to fall down a bit”. It’s just… no. No. If your reader has to struggle simply because of the inherent complexity of your ideas, then that may be difficult to avoid. But your very JOB as a writer is to minimize this. By all means posit theories or raise questions, but don’t make your writer “struggle” to pull meaning out of your writing.
I’m not saying “dumb it down”. I’m saying that if you can make it smarter, it will ALSO be simpler.
Dave..Quote Reply
Dave..,
Dayum.. you tells em Dave.
To add to that, I ain’t to smart but I like to read teh news and commentaries. I find the only cats that wants their readers to struggle are 1. mystic charlatans ‘n 2. pseudo intellectuals that don’t want to be understood coz the message stinks or 3. Neetchay. Clearly this chemist aint fall in one of them categories and the message is just fun analysis so he just gotta make his writing more accessible and less snobby to make the meanderins more enjoyable to all. Know ur audience yo. Know thyself.
PeppercornQuote Reply
Wow, great essay.
DarkstarQuote Reply
Lady Flint,
Thank you for your kind words. I am humbled to know that my essay had such positive effect.
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Pearson MooreQuote Reply
Zapala,
Thank you for your warm comments on my essay. I think you hit on something important here. If Game of Thrones were not intended to elicit sustained thought regarding ambiguous and not entirely developed ideas, it would be just another 60-minute black-and-white drama where Truth, Justice, and the American Way always wins and nothing–least of all deep themes related to the human condition–is left to reflective imagination or engaging debate. But we are expected to think, to bring our own experiences into a more substantial ordering of characters and concepts in the series. We have to interact with GoT–we have work to do!
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Pearson MooreQuote Reply
Langkard,
Yes. I think this final clash between adult expectation and the real-world reality of primal forces is going to lead to the final action sequences of the series, and will become the most cataclysmic depiction of outright war we have yet witnessed. I think we’ve had small tastes of it already: the meeting with the White Walker in the prologue, the meeting with the wight late last season, certainly Daenerys’ comfort with the hottest oven. In every cases, those who would otherwise have been called to battle instead have looked on in stunned disbelief. Only Jon Snow rose to the occasion and killed the wight with fire. These little glimpses into the coming storm have given us an idea of just some of the enormous difficulties the nature of primal power poses to a world grown complacent in its misplaced attention to courtly intrigues.
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Pearson MooreQuote Reply
Pearson,
Again vermy much enjoyed your essay. After three epsisodes in season 2 and finally having met Stannis en also seeing Renly again I have a question for you.
In your essay: THE SEVEN THESES: LEADERSHIP ARGUMENTS IN GAME OF THRONES
you discuss 7 players in the game of thrones and who of them would be the best leader for Westeros and thus should sit the iron throne. If you look at the kings of the war of five kings in the same manner, who of them do you think is the best leader?
Joël LingerQuote Reply
No Raven For You!,
Thank you!
Pearson MooreQuote Reply
sukeyna,
I loved the two speeches on the meaning of power. They said so much, at so many levels. The difficulty for us as viewers is that there are so many of these rich moments!
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Pearson MooreQuote Reply
Jen@House Stark,
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Pearson MooreQuote Reply
OhDanyBoy,
Thank you for your generous comments. I definitely take some getting used to. I can’t tell you the number of emails I’ve received saying “I struggled through the first two chapters, but then I started understanding.” I hope the struggle is worthwhile!
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Pearson MooreQuote Reply
What an excellent episode!!! Wow, this is why I love this show, how the story ebbs and flows, the characters and their nature/personalities etc. Many critics refered to “The Wire” as a novel created for television, well “A Song Of Ice And Fire” is among the great literary sagas of our time, and it trully has been brought to life GoT.
Cannot wait for the rest of the season!
loco73Quote Reply
I just watched the episode again. The two scenes of Theon that take place right next to each other are amazing (burning the letter and then the saltwater baptism). I can’t wait to watch it on bluray. A couple of the best scenes on HBO in a while, IMO, especially knowing the hardships in store for Theon and the rest of the iron born.
BuddyQuote Reply
Longclaw,
Thank you for your kind comments.
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Pearson MooreQuote Reply
MShepNJ,
You make excellent comments on Sansa and Theon. Thank you for contributing to the discussion!
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Pearson MooreQuote Reply
Wrath of the Gods,
Thank you!
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Mimsy,
You ask a question I consider at the core of GoT: Why do strong, virtuous people continually fail this game of thrones? Why did Ned Stark fail? Why do I say Brienne of Tarth will fail? Both of these characters represent great virtues, so why should they not succeed? That they should fail is upsetting to our human sensibilities, our deep need to see good triumph over evil. Keep this question in mind. I have an answer to this question, and I worked it out in Game of Thrones Season One Essays. But my answer may not be better than anyone else’s, and I imagine most readers would welcome your contribution and others’ to the dialogue around the complex morality of GoT. Thanks for asking the question!
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Aaron,
Thank you so much!
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fuelpagan,
You bring an excellent, well-defended argument to the discussion. This is exactly the kind of perspective on GoT I believe is not only valid, but something we need to keep in mind as we proceed through the series. I’m very much aware that I may be overreaching in saying there is a distinction between powers temporal and powers primal. One of the reasons I am inclined to take this point of view is that it supports my GoT thesis, which at this point, only one season into the series, can only be a shaky, tentative idea. Even if we base the thesis on the first five novels, we know at least two more novels are coming, and it seems quite likely our perspective will have to change as GRRM works out the endgame. What I would add to the discussion at this point is the idea that GRRM may be attempting an unconventional response to the question of power. I suppose it would not be all that unusual in a fantasy epic to propose that there are Powers of the Universe that must be tapped so that the hero can bring about a final just order. I feel that GRRM is not going to settle for a traditional power argument, though, and this is one of the reasons for my assertion of a bifurcation between human powers and natural powers. Another support for this idea, I believe, can be found in the fact that these primal powers are being discovered at the geographic periphery of human activity in Westeros and Essos, which can be considered a concrete manifestation of the refusal of the most learned to admit of the possibility of any such powers. Primal powers seems to be dancing about the periphery of their thoughts, just outside the region of thought these most educated among the leaders of Westeros would consider eligible for inclusion in a rational construct. That is, they’re not going to consider the existence of primal powers something worthy of logical thought.
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LordEddardStark,
Thank you for your kind comments. In future essays I may decide to illustrate a single theme throughout the essay, but I may also make a decision to wander about, covering multiple themes. I am guided by a few general considerations, but primary among these is the desire to bring to the fore any ideas I feel may be useful to the stimulation of thought about themes, characters, or events of the episode. I know this hopping about from one idea to another may disappoint or confuse some readers, but I take this approach in hopes that an even greater number of readers will gain greater appreciation of the episode through the tack I choose to take. But I do appreciate all feedback, and I realise many readers truly enjoy the more complete examination of a single theme. Thank you for contributing to the discussion!
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userj,
Thank you for your comments!
You said:
“One way you could immediately improve your writing, is to carefully make sure that you do not directly contradict yourself in your prose.
For example, regarding Brienne:
“Hers is not a fair-weather loyalty.”
“…she is among the knights of summer, and her greatest virtue—her loyalty—cannot endure the privations of darkness and ice.”
It’s not that I have problems with your opinions, its that it’s actually impossible for the reader to determine out what you are trying to say because you directly contradict yourself. And you don’t pose it as a question, or speculate about which is true, you simply say one thing, and then say the exact opposite. ”
I appreciate your position on this. Irony is one of the oldest tools of the dramatist, and I often take an ironic approach in my essays in order to illustrate a point. In this essay I juxtaposed Brienne’s extraordinary devotion–really, her position in the story as exemplar of the virtue of loyalty–with my belief that even those who strive for more than “summer virtues” will nevertheless find themselves stymied by GRRM’s difficult story-world. Thus, Brienne has “winter intentions”, if you will, but the rigours of Westeros will deny and destroy even those displaying virtues we would normally consider extraordinary. That’s the irony: Even the great among the leaders of Westeros will not endure the winter (the coming tribulations and wars).
In this case I am using irony, not contradiction. If you look to my other published essays, you will occasionally find me going much further, into the type of contradiction you indicate here. However, even in these essays, the contradiction is only apparent. When I begin with a nonsensical or contradictory position, I almost always work my way out to a logical explanation that reveals the initial contradiction to have been only apparent. I do this when I wish to make a point about the episode that might otherwise have resisted explanation. I have not yet seen need to employ this technique in GoT, but I would not be surprised to find in a future episode that such a tack would be useful. I try to match my approach to the ideas expressed in the episode.
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you-know-nothing,
Thank you for your kind thoughts on my essay.
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